User talk:Mice for trans

Your edits to MAP30: Icon of Sin (Doom II)‎‎
I've had to revert them as they were unconstructive. For a start, hyperlinks to other pages are there for a reason, and should not be removed unless there is a very good reason for doing so. You also rephrased sentences in such a way as to alter their meaning, sometimes nonsensically. For instance, in English we generally don't use gender-specific pronouns when referring directly to inanimate objects (e.g. the pictures on the steps of this level are "on its sides", not "on his sides"); and you changed "revenant" (which is the official name of a Doom monster) to "ghost" (which is not, and in any case is not at all the same thing; a ghost is a dead and insubstantial creature, a revenant is someone who has returned from the dead and is far from insubstantial).

Be more careful with future edits. — RobertATfm (talk) 14:47, June 4, 2013 (UTC)